diff --git a/changelog/unreleased/issue-5352 b/changelog/unreleased/issue-5352
index 6de23c591..e672c5408 100644
--- a/changelog/unreleased/issue-5352
+++ b/changelog/unreleased/issue-5352
@@ -1,11 +1,12 @@
 Enhancement: Add `--exclude-cloud-files` on macOS (e.g. iCloud Drive)
 
-Restic treated iCloud-backed files like ordinary local files, which forced a
+Restic treated iCloud-backed files like normal local files, which forced a
 full download of placeholders and other cloud-only content during backups.
 
 The `backup` command now supports `--exclude-cloud-files` to skip those files on
 supported macOS versions. From Sonoma (macOS 14.0) onward the option can prevent
-unwanted downloads.
+unwanted downloads. Older macOS versions will still download the files during
+a backup run.
 
 https://github.com/restic/restic/issues/5352
 https://github.com/restic/restic/pull/4990
diff --git a/changelog/unreleased/issue-5383 b/changelog/unreleased/issue-5383
index d1abcbb12..f6b07471f 100644
--- a/changelog/unreleased/issue-5383
+++ b/changelog/unreleased/issue-5383
@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@ Enhancement: Reduce progress bar refresh rates to reduce energy usage
 
 Progress bars were updated at 60 fps, which could cause high CPU or GPU usage
 in some terminal emulators. The refresh rate is now 10 fps to conserve energy.
-The lower rate also makes it possible to select text in the terminal with some
-emulators.
+For some terminal emulators, the lower rate is also necessary to allow selecting
+text in the terminal.
 
 https://github.com/restic/restic/issues/5383
 https://github.com/restic/restic/pull/5551
diff --git a/changelog/unreleased/issue-5477 b/changelog/unreleased/issue-5477
index 0af268130..c43aeacab 100644
--- a/changelog/unreleased/issue-5477
+++ b/changelog/unreleased/issue-5477
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 Bugfix: Password prompt was sometimes not shown for `backup -v`
 
-The repository password prompt could be missing when running the `backup -v`
+The repository password prompt could be hidden when running the `backup -v`
 command. This has been fixed.
 
 https://github.com/restic/restic/issues/5477
diff --git a/changelog/unreleased/pull-5424 b/changelog/unreleased/pull-5424
index f3bde47bf..a1630873c 100644
--- a/changelog/unreleased/pull-5424
+++ b/changelog/unreleased/pull-5424
@@ -4,7 +4,6 @@ Restic enabled some Windows filesystem privileges only while reading or writing
 security descriptors. Extended attributes could be read before enabling the backup
 privilege, possibly resulting in missed data or errors.
 
-Restic now enables the relevant filesystem privileges before any file access and
-requests extended-attribute reads with the backup privilege where needed.
+Restic now enables the relevant filesystem privileges before any file access.
 
 https://github.com/restic/restic/pull/5424
diff --git a/changelog/unreleased/pull-5664 b/changelog/unreleased/pull-5664
index 3b650c4bd..8bcd18908 100644
--- a/changelog/unreleased/pull-5664
+++ b/changelog/unreleased/pull-5664
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 Bugfix: `restic find --pack` now lists blobs for tree packs
 
-`restic find --pack` treated tree-related pack files like data packs and
-produced no matches. It now reports the expected blobs for tree packs as well.
+`restic find --pack <tree-pack>` now reports blobs for packs that only contain
+tree blobs.
 
 https://github.com/restic/restic/issues/5280
 https://github.com/restic/restic/pull/5664
diff --git a/changelog/unreleased/pull-5718 b/changelog/unreleased/pull-5718
index 2d27ca9dc..c0babde21 100644
--- a/changelog/unreleased/pull-5718
+++ b/changelog/unreleased/pull-5718
@@ -1,8 +1,7 @@
 Enhancement: Stricter early validation of the `mount` mountpoint
 
-`restic mount` could accept mountpoints that only failed after loading the
-repository. The mountpoint must now name a directory the current user can
-access and write to; otherwise `restic mount` immediately exits with an error
-before opening the repository.
+`restic mount` could accept invalid mountpoints that resulted in an error after
+loading the repository. The mountpoint must now name a directory the current user can
+access and write to. This is now checked before opening the repository.
 
 https://github.com/restic/restic/pull/5718